As far as your script goes, I've noticed your English grammar tends to vary from fluent, to accented, to clearly second-language and I was wondering: do you have, need, or even any desire for an editor, Arty? I do NOT wish to give the impression of insult, but I felt compelled to ask.
Just thought about it, she is the last of her species, and it's a wonder that she is alive, this could be used to tremendous effect. this takes place some 10000 years into the future, and even in our time we are looking at cloning animals which have been dead for millennium. Cloning her could recreate the human race, and starting a civilization from scratch like that would be a wonderful experiment.
